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Lost..


They give me happiness pills every day
Hoping they'll take away the pain
But only tears and sorrow they bring
As if I can smell but not touch the spring

I'm lost in my own dream
Can't move; for help I can't scream
Trapped between life and death,
It hurts at every single breath

I'm in a sleeping unconscious stage,
Feeding only with my rage,
Never going to break free,
Maybe, this was supposed to be...
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drewhoffman Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013
Lovely in its desperation-- beautiful.
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iMerge Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
This is horrible, and desperate, but most of all beautiful. I like it.

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senador Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A very good poem! :)
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aniqe Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you:)
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itotallycantdraw-woo Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sad, but lovely. 
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aniqe Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks:)
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DidoQueen Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013
Beautiful! 
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aniqe Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks:)
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